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Yuri Gagarin
I sent you postcard with first cosmonaut in the world- Yuri Gagarin.
The flight was 12 April, 1961, and since that every year 12 April we celebrate "Day of Cosmonautics".
After the flight he started travel around the world with "Mission of peace".
In England he met queen Elizabeth 2, and she even took photo with him, contrary to etiquette.
She said that he doesn't usual person, but heavenly, so there is no violation of etiquette.
And today hers birthday, she is 92.
And Gagarin died at age 34, crashed on a plane МиГ-15 (you can see it on stamp).
So strange, he survive in space, but lost in usual training flight.

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- I sent you postcard with first cosmonaut in the world- Yuri Gagarin.
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- The flight was 12 April, 1961, and since that every year 12 April we celebrate "Day of Cosmonautics".
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- After the flight he started travel around the world with "Mission of peace".
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- In England he met queen Elizabeth 2, and she even took photo with him, contrary to etiquette.
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- She said that he doesn't usual person, but heavenly, so there is no violation of etiquette.
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- And today hers birthday, she is 92.
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- And Gagarin died at age 34, crashed on a plane МиГ-15 (you can see it on stamp).
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- So strange, he survive in space, but lost in usual training flight.
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