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Rédigé par tmd0219 - English

    • Plz give me a correction !!

    • It's a spoken language.
    • So please correct some strange expressions Thanks for inviting me to Interview.
    • As for me, I'm gonna tell you three things about myself.
    • First of all, I majored in linguistics in university so i learned the importance of communication skills in teaming.
    • We normally think that a man who can speak fluently can communicate well.
    • But I think listening well is more important for good communication.
    • So I practiced to listen everyone's opinions, and draw the best conclusion.
    • Secondly, I'm do my best in everything.
    • When I transferred to another university, I couldn't adpat myself to new circumstance.
    • So I was getting hard to improve my grades.
    • Althought my major was definitely changed I thaught "Impossible is nothing if I just do my best"I tried to study harder an harder and finally I was selected one of the honor student in university when I was in 4th grade.
    • Last but not least, I always improve myself.
    • Nowadays, many people compare their achievements with other people's do.
  • It make them lose their self-respect.
    • So I think we need to compare our achievement with that we did before.
    • Then we can improve ourselves better than yesterday.
    • Helen Keller said "Life is either a daring adventure or nothing." As this saying, I always trying to meet with new experiences and adapt myself to those new circumstances.

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