Corrections

Rédigé par Nasie - English

  • A sad day.

  • It was a very unpleasant day.
    • I was going to see an opera in the theatre, but when I woke up, I understood that I was ill.
    • I had sore throat and headache.
    • I tried to conseal the fact, because I wanted to see the opera very much, even if I had to go to school in the morning.
    • But I told my Grandma, because I thought she'd be able to understand me and won't tell anybody.
    • But, mostly unfortunately, she told my Dad, and he forbade me to go to school (and to the opera, of course).
    • When my Grandma showed up, I asked her why has she done it and that if she hadn't told it, I would have gone to school and to the opera.
    • But all of a sudden she became very angry and told me that if she hadn't told it to my Dad I would've felt a lot worse than now ( I would've been more sick).
  • I was very sad, and I didn't agree with her.
  • Now I think she was right.
    • I had the flu that time, and in the evening I felt very bad and my temperature was extremely high.
    • What could happen if I went to school that day?
    • I have visited the opera in a month, so I had nothing lost, and I was happy.

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