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  • Attack in Siria

    • Hi, I have a challenge I must to write about a different topic every day since to improve my redaction in english, Please Help me A day like other, Began airstrikes, from The heaven dropped a booms with a chemical substance, this attack injured a many women and children, it is horrible to listen about this events many people suffured in other countries and you dont do anything.

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    • Hi, I have a challenge I must to write about a different topic every day since to improve my redaction in english, Please Help me A day like other, Began airstrikes, from The heaven dropped a booms with a chemical substance, this attack injured a many women and children, it is horrible to listen about this events many people suffured in other countries and you dont do anything.
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    • Hi, I have a challenge. I must to write about a different topic every day since to improve my redaction in english,English writing skills. Please Hhelp me.

      A On a day like any other, Began airstrikes, from The heaven dropped a bo began. Bombs with a chemical substance, t dropped from the sky. This attack injured a many women and children, it i. It's horrible to listenhear about thisese events in other countries because many people suffuered in other countries and you dont do anythingand nothing is done to stop it.
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