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    • Interviewer : Hi how are you? well , tell me about you ?
    • Me :Hi I'm fine thank you .
    • Well I live in Pereira in Villasantana and I l currenty live with my dad, my mom , and my two brothers, my dad works as a welder and my mom as a hairstyle , I'm studying at college I'm studying physical engeneer.
    • Interviewer ; work and study is dificult , tell me how do you deal with it?
    • Me : Yes , I know it but I have worked and studyed before at the same time ,I can fix it I can manage time well Interviewer : really !
    • and what have you worked in ?
    • Me : I used to sell bracelets and food at university and by my neaiborhood, I made the bracelets and sold them in an economic price and the food I used to sell it with my dad , I sold hotdogs and soda called Cocacola Interviewer : Tell me about your short plans Me : Sure, my plans right now are only working and studying , I'm not planing to do anything else.
    • Interviewer : how long are you planing to work here?
    • Me: well, I'm looking for economic stability and this company gives me that stability so I was thinking to stay here untill I graduate from the college.
    • Interviewer : do you thing you're good at selling?
    • Me: I abslutely concider myself good a selling I worked selling and I learnt that the most impotant thing is the costumer's needs Interviewer :Why do you want to work for this company?
    • Me :Because I'm looking for stability, a good working environment and an opportunity to improve my English and of course, gain some experience.

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    • Well I live in Pereira in Villasantana and I l currenty live with my dad, my mom , and my two brothers, my dad works as a welder and my mom as a hairstyle , I'm studying at college I'm studying physical engeneer.
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    • Well I live in Pereira, in Villasantana, and I l currently live with my dad, my mom , and my two brothers, m. My dad works as a welder and my mom as a hairstyle ,ist. I'm studying at college I'm studying physical engeneer engineering at college.
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    • Me : Yes , I know it but I have worked and studyed before at the same time ,I can fix it I can manage time well Interviewer : really !
      투표하세요!
    • Me : "Yes , I know it, but I have worked and studyied before at the same time ,I can fix it . I can manage my time well .

      Interviewer :
      r"Really !"
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    • Me : I used to sell bracelets and food at university and by my neaiborhood, I made the bracelets and sold them in an economic price and the food I used to sell it with my dad , I sold hotdogs and soda called Cocacola Interviewer : Tell me about your short plans Me : Sure, my plans right now are only working and studying , I'm not planing to do anything else.
      투표하세요!
    • Me : "I used to sell bracelets and food at university and byaround my neaighbourhood,. I made the bracelets and sold them inat an economicaffordable price, and the food I used to sell it with my dad ,. I sold hot-dogs and soda called Coca-cola ."

      Interviewer :
      "Tell me about your short-term plans."

      Me :
      "Sure, my plans right now are only working and studying , . "I'm not planning to do anything else."
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    • Me: well, I'm looking for economic stability and this company gives me that stability so I was thinking to stay here untill I graduate from the college.
      투표하세요!
    • Me: w"Well, I'm looking for economic stabilfinancial security and this company gives me that stability, so I was thinking tof staying here untill I graduate from the college."
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    • Me: I abslutely concider myself good a selling I worked selling and I learnt that the most impotant thing is the costumer's needs Interviewer :Why do you want to work for this company?
      투표하세요!
    • Me: "I absolutely concsider myself good at selling . I've worked a long time selling, and I've learnt that the most important thing is the costumer's needs ."

      Interviewer :
      "Why do you want to work for this company?"
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    • Me :Because I'm looking for stability, a good working environment and an opportunity to improve my English and of course, gain some experience.
      투표하세요!
    • Me : "Because I'm looking for stability, a good working environment, and an opportunity to improve my English a. And of course, to gain some experience. "
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