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  • Music and me

  • I like listening to music, but I can't say that I'm a meloman or I don't imagine my life without music.
    • I usually listen to music when I drive in the car, especially it's nice when you go for a long distance.
    • In the end of the journey, when your friend and you are tired, it doesn't necessary to talk, you only listen to music, watch on the road and feel happy.
    • I prefer listen a particular list of music, but also I like the radio.
  • My favourite kind of music is something dynamic and energetic, like rock or pop rock.
    • Usually my chose doesn't depend on my mood, even if I feel sad I don't listen sad songs.
    • But sometimes I choose a special music in special seasons, for example New Year's songs, songs about victory on Victory Day and dancing songs in the summer.

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    • I usually listen to music when I drive in the car, especially it's nice when you go for a long distance.
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    • I usually listen to music when I drive in the car, and it's especially it's/really nice when you go for a long distancride.
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    • In the end of the journey, when your friend and you are tired, it doesn't necessary to talk, you only listen to music, watch on the road and feel happy.
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    • In the end of the journey, when your friend and you are tired, it doeisn't necessary to talk, you only listen to music, watch on the road and feel happy.
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    • InAt the end of the journey, when you and your friend and you are tired, it doeisn't necessary to talk,; you onlyjust listen to the music, watch on the road and feel happy.
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    • But sometimes I choose a special music in special seasons, for example New Year's songs, songs about victory on Victory Day and dancing songs in the summer.
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    • But sometimes I choose a specialfic music infor special seoccasions, for example New Year's songs, songs about victory on Victory Day and dancing songse music in the summer.
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