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  • "Name some environmental problems and give some solutions to them".
    • Today, the ecological situation in the world can be described as close to critical.There are environmental problems, like: 1) Destroyed or disposed of thousands of species of plants and animals; 2)Largely destroyed forest cover; 3) The atmosphere in many places polluted to the maximum allowable size, and clean air is deficient, and others.
  • What measures are needed to solve global environmental problems?
  • Firstly, we should move from consumer-technocratic approach to nature to seek harmony with it.
    • Also, the improving the relationship between man and nature, is a reasonable self-restraint in the expenditure of natural resources - especially energy resources (oil, coal) that are life-essential humanity.
    • Moreover, the greatest solution to environmental problems, is the formation of ecological consciousness in society, people's understanding of nature as any other living creature on which it is impossible to rule without prejudice to him and myself.
    • Environmental training and education in society should be placed on the state level, held in early childhood.
    • In any inspirations, being born mind, and aspirations, the same vector of human behavior must be its harmony with nature.
  • "Instruction ends in the school-room, but education ends only with life".
  • In school, we learn to understand the world.
    • There we learn the rules, formulas, laws.
    • In life everything is differently.
    • Learning is not only confined in the classroom, but both inside and outside it.
    • I strongly believe that the end of school is just another beginning of new life.
    • Firstly, acquiring knowledge and instruction from teachers can give us the direction in learning, but as lecture time is limited in the classroom; teachers cannot be with us whenever and wherever; teachers also cannot teach us everything in the classroom as they do not know as well as ourselves what our aptitudes and learning needs, we have to gain knowledge both inside and outside the classroom to perfect our study progress and effect.
    • Moreover, when we finish school, we get a knowledge base.
    • We need this knowledge in real life very rarely.
  • It is much more useful in life to use your own experience.
  • In adult life we learn every day.
  • We can see the mistakes of others and not repeat them in our life.
  • "Live and learn".
  • This phrase is the law of life.
    • During the whole life a person learns something new.
  • For example, after school and university a person finds a job.
    • There he meets many new and unfamiliar people, he has to communicate with.
    • Sometimes relationships are formed difficultly.
    • To sum up, the whole human life consists of learning and development.
    • And they end only with life.

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