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  • Hello

    • Hello, I want to learn English, but I am bad in that topic.
  • So, could you correct me? Well...
    • I am going to count a story.
    • Carlitos is a big boy but his parents said him that he is a stupid and he felt very bad, started to hate all.
    • But one day, a boy seems in his life.
    • They are good friends, they to used to play and go in bike at park.
  • They are very happy together.
    • And after, that boy left far and Carlitos was very sad, but he understood that life should living with happiness and love.
    • So he lived fine, but died.

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