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what a short holiday
Today is my last day in bandung, hmm.. what a short holiday.
Today, i'll go back to jakarta because tomorrow must back to work again.
Can you speak english? Yes, i can. How about you?
Can u speak too?
Where do you from?
Surabaya in origin? Hikks..
i still waiting at pasterpoint travel since 12.30.
P.m , i'm so bored, damn bored!,!,! because before i come to the travel agent, i not yet reserve for the ticket to jakarta.

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- i still waiting at pasterpoint travel since 12.30.
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