Korekty

Text from Nadal2017 - English

  • Tourism in spoilt areas of the world.

  • It is very hard to think that wild life and nature are in danger of extincion because of the humanity.
  • We keep on investigating new ways to improve our lives but it not always means that we are doing our best for the rest of the living creatures.
  • One of the most exciting activities for the humans is travelling and knowing new places.
  • And this becomes more stimulating if we have the opportunity to visit places like the poles, for example, where not many people have the chance to admire so beautiful landscapes.
  • It is well known that the pollution is increasing day by day and those wonderful scenaries aren´t unfortunately safe.
  • In my opinion, although the companies which arrange these kind of tours are very careful with the enviroment and the wild life, this should be forbidden.
  • There should be at least a place where pollution couldn´t arrive under no circumstances.
  • It should be a sanctuary.
  • Unfortunately, nowadays money and industry are more important than life and that is why this kind of activities are carrying out every day.
  • Who knows whether in a near future every nation will sign an agreement to save and protect unspoilt places?

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English

  • Tytuł
  • Zdanie 1
  • Zdanie 2
    • We keep on investigating new ways to improve our lives but it not always means that we are doing our best for the rest of the living creatures.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 2DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 2
  • Zdanie 3
  • Zdanie 4
    • And this becomes more stimulating if we have the opportunity to visit places like the poles, for example, where not many people have the chance to admire so beautiful landscapes.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4
  • Zdanie 5
    • It is well known that the pollution is increasing day by day and those wonderful scenaries aren´t unfortunately safe.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5
  • Zdanie 6
    • In my opinion, although the companies which arrange these kind of tours are very careful with the enviroment and the wild life, this should be forbidden.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6
  • Zdanie 7
  • Zdanie 8
  • Zdanie 9
    • Unfortunately, nowadays money and industry are more important than life and that is why this kind of activities are carrying out every day.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9
  • Zdanie 10