Correcciones

Texto de EDMOLHE - English

    • Deforestation

    • Deforestation has been controversial topic around the world.
    • While ones say this is beneficial due to economic interests, other ones think that it is dangerous.
    • A good point about this is attributed to the fact that growing population need more feedin sources.
    • So if the forest disappeared there would be more space for extensive agriculture and farming, which means sustainable economy.
    • Besides, deforestation give living space.
    • It would resolve the problem of over-populated countries where the rainforest is placed.
    • Moving small groups of people to cleared space and avoiding over-crowding.
    • Despite of ecologists are not agree, deforestation support the rainforest.
    • For example, U.S. propouse to invest 25 billion dollars for its protection.
    • The deal would be change a dollar for a ton of CO2 emited by country.
    • Whereas, the reduction of deforestation would make the reduction of carbon price.
    • It would becoming the global warming worst.

POR FAVOR, ¡AYUDA A CORREGIR CADA ORACIÓN! - English