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    • Part 1: As the environment has big impact on the way we think, by environment I don't only intend nature but also people around us, we have to pay attention to what kind of people we spend time with.
    • If you choose not to respect this advice, and you say that you can control my mind.
    • I would say that you are a dreamer.
    • You can resist to the differences for certain time, and you can stay loyal to some principals, but at the end of the count you'll find that you changed.
    • Part 2: Is the following sentence correct : Which country does this man belong to ?

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    • Part 1: As the environment has big impact on the way we think, by environment I don't only intend nature but also people around us, we have to pay attention to what kind of people we spend time with.
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      As the environment has       a big impact on the way we think, (by environment I don't only intendmean the nature but also people around us,) we have to pay attention to what kind of people we spend time with.
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    • You can resist to the differences for certain time, and you can stay loyal to some principals, but at the end of the count you'll find that you changed.
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    • You can resist to the differences for a certain time, and you can stay loyal to some principals, but at the end of the countday you'll find out that you've changed.
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    • Part 2: Is the following sentence correct : Which country does this man belong to ?
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      Is the following sentence correct       :?
      Where's this man from ? / Which country doeis this man belong tofrom ? ¶
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