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    • Once upon a time, in a peaceful forest, seven dwarves who lived with a beautiful young woman.
    • This woman was known by all to be the finest in the kingdom with his skin white as snow, lips red as blood and hair as black as the feathers of crows.
  • But the poor girl was jealous of large pars beauty, including predominantly all: Queen.
    • The poor Queen, who thought the most beautiful of all, jealous of Snow White's mirror since he had confessed find the most beautiful girl.
    • After numerous attempts to kill Snow White discovered the house of the seven dwarfs, where she lived for some time now.
    • For several weeks, the young woman occupied the seven dwarfs netoyait her home, preparing to eat them every day and learned to know the seven miners.
  • Happy was he who put the mood in the house was also the first to want to taste the meal prepared for the lady.
  • Sneezy was always a cold, nothing could guérrir although other dwarves often try to prevent sneezing!
  • Bashful himself was very little about him and could not help but stutter when talking to Snow White.
  • Sleepy, the girl did not see much and because he spent most of his time sleeping!
  • But those that were most apréciait undoubtedly Doc, Grumpy and Dopey.
  • Only, while all lived happily in the forest, Dopey - who was in love with Snow White foux-learned by forest animals that prince had him remove his beauty.
    • That seemed most beta seven dwarves then began to think alone in the forest, how he would prevent the girl from.

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    • This woman was known by all to be the finest in the kingdom with his skin white as snow, lips red as blood and hair as black as the feathers of crows.
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    • This woman was known by all to be the finest in the kingdom with hiser skin white as snow, lips red as blood, and hair as black as the feathers of crows.
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    • The poor Queen, who thought the most beautiful of all, jealous of Snow White's mirror since he had confessed find the most beautiful girl.
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    • The poor Queen, who thought the most beautiful of all, was jealous of Snow White's mirror since she had confessed findto be the most beautiful girl.
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    • After numerous attempts to kill Snow White discovered the house of the seven dwarfs, where she lived for some time now.
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    • After numerous attempts to kill Snow White, she discovered the house of the seven dwarfs, where she had lived for some time now.
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    • For several weeks, the young woman occupied the seven dwarfs netoyait her home, preparing to eat them every day and learned to know the seven miners.
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    • For several weeks, the young woman occupied the seven dwarfs netoyait her home, preparing to eat with them every day and learned to know the seven miners.
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    • Only, while all lived happily in the forest, Dopey - who was in love with Snow White foux-learned by forest animals that prince had him remove his beauty.
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    • That seemed most beta seven dwarves then began to think alone in the forest, how he would prevent the girl from.
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    • That seemed most beta seven dwarves then began to think alone in the forest, how he would prevent the girl from. yan yami rost kath
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