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Text from Symmons - English

  • Armed robbery in live

    • The shop has been targeted in an armed robbery around 6 am.
    • Tony went outside after he switched on break time and has been dragged into the shop with a gun pointed against his chest by one of the two thieves.
  • I was sat down in the warmth of the night heater during the entire time of the robbery and never went outside.
    • The two men has stolen 60 000 pounds according to the staffs.
    • Everybody were shocked, Tony has phoned up the police and they were at scene pretty quickly.
  • The investigation took place and a policewoman questioned me and wrote my details down.
  • Another patroll turned up as the one present had just finished their shift.
  • A group of detectives came into the shop as well and we both went into the car of one of them for Tony's statement.
  • He explained again with even more details.
  • We've been waiting such a long time before Simon and another colleague arrived to pick us up.
    • Area manager asked me if I was alright and I mentioned that I would not carring on doing the delivery today so she has rong our transport manager to have the authorisation me to come back with the driver.
  • Simon was discontented as he would have to deliver on his own.
  • His colleague gave him a hand for the two first shops and drove us back to the depot.
  • We had a moment in the small office room with Dan who was quite professionnal.
    • We had a card with a phone number we could call privately and being listened and adviced by someone.
    • Finally got back home after I fought through what I would discribed as a blizzard.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English