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    • My essay for English class

    • Although People brought up in various environments thus have different value on questions like what's the most important consideration for making relationship with others, and such question should not have certain answer, based on my life experiments, I do agree that telling the truth is on top of considerations for communications among people.
    • As for businessmen, making relationship is a method to combine advantages belong to different companies in order to net more profit.
    • Just imaging, there were a project which had a demand for operators that all their funding should be over 4 million dollars.
    • Although two companies with two million dollars could not handle the project solo, they would enjoy the benefit by cooperating.
    • Duel to this motivation, I do maintain that bilateral companies should make no hide of information about their own so that they all could concisely assess the cooperation’s potential and do their best choose.
    • Still those two companies, one of them, though, have funding of two million dollars, one million dollars debt also threat it.
  • In this case, the other company may give up the cooperation for financial security.
  • Someone should point out that this model is too ideal for the real world.
    • Actually, there are lots of liars are deceiving their customers or cooperators to make money.
  • They may boast the performance of their products for more selling or sponsorship.
  • I can't argue that this model is a good one-time deal.
    • But lies will finally be revealed, and the integral profits will be lower than the long-lasting business.
    • Also, for people in their life, telling truth will bring about trust and that needs no more reiteration.
    • However, someone may hold that white lie, lying to take care of the recipient's feelings, have to be understood and telling truth is not always suitable.
    • However, I believe most people want to make choices by themselves.
    • When we become white-liars, we do not respect their right to accumulate information belong to them.
    • When I published my first paper, I did not let one of my friend whose experiment still should no valuable data know on purpose to keep him from nervous.
    • But he considered that I patronized him when he finally know.
    • If time went back, I would tell him and tried to help him out with his experiment.

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    • Although People brought up in various environments thus have different value on questions like what's the most important consideration for making relationship with others, and such question should not have certain answer, based on my life experiments, I do agree that telling the truth is on top of considerations for communications among people.
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    • Although Ppeople brought up in various environments thus have different values on questions like "what's the most important consideration for making a relationship with others", and such questions should nodn't have one certain answer, b. Based on my life experiments, I do agree with the fact that telling the truth is on the top of considerations for communications amongng with people.
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    • As for businessmen, making relationship is a method to combine advantages belong to different companies in order to net more profit.
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    • As for businessmen, making relationships is a method tof combineing advantages belonging to different companies, in order to net more profit.
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    • Just imaging, there were a project which had a demand for operators that all their funding should be over 4 million dollars.
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    • Just imaging,e that there wereas a project which had a demand for operators that all theirwhose funding(s) should be over 4 million dollars.
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    • Although two companies with two million dollars could not handle the project solo, they would enjoy the benefit by cooperating.
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    • Although two companies with two2 million dollars could non't handle the project solo, they would enjoy the benefit by cooperating.
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    • Duel to this motivation, I do maintain that bilateral companies should make no hide of information about their own so that they all could concisely assess the cooperation’s potential and do their best choose.
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    • Duel to this motivation, I do maintain that bilateral companies should make no hide of information about their own so that they all could concisely assess the cooperation’s potential and domake their best chooseice(s).
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    • Still those two companies, one of them, though, have funding of two million dollars, one million dollars debt also threat it.
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    • StillHowever, one of thoese two companies, one of them, though, have fundings of two2 million dollars, one million dollars debt also threat it.
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    • However, someone may hold that white lie, lying to take care of the recipient's feelings, have to be understood and telling truth is not always suitable.
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    • However, someone may hold that white lie, lying to take care of the recipient's feelings, haveing to be understood and telling the truth is non't always suitable.
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    • When I published my first paper, I did not let one of my friend whose experiment still should no valuable data know on purpose to keep him from nervous.
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    • When I published my first paper, I did not let one of my friends whose experiment still should no valuable data, know on purpose to keep him from getting nervous.
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