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HI THERE!
- HI im new here.
- I joined this club because of i want to improve my english very well. can anyone be my friend and try to chat with me in english language? thanks for your kindness to helping me :D :)

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- HI THERE!
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- HI im new here.
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- H~~I i~~i, I'm new here.
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- I joined this club because of i want to improve my english very well. can anyone be my friend and try to chat with me in english language? thanks for your kindness to helping me :D :)
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- I joined this club because of i want to improve my eEnglish very well. cCan anyone be my friend and try to chat with me in eEnglish language? thanks for your kindness to help~~ing~~ me :D :)
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- I joined this club because ~~of i~~I want to improve my eEnglish very ~~well~~much. cCan anyone be my friend and try to chat with me in eEnglish language? tThanks for your kindness to help~~ing~~ me :D :)
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- I joined this club because ~~of i~~I want to improve my eEnglish ~~very well~~. cCan anyone be my friend and try to chat with me in eEnglish ~~language~~? tThanks for your kindness toin helping me :D :)
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 2