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A day with my cousin
- Hello, Today, I have spent my day with my family because my cousin came from Paris for the week-end.
- Although the weather was very cold, It was really funny, i enjoyed to see her and their childrens.
- One day, I would like to go to Paris to meet her and in the same occasion to visit Paris because i have never visited this city.

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- Hello, Today, I have spent my day with my family because my cousin came from Paris for the week-end.
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- Although the weather was very cold, It was really funny, i enjoyed to see her and their childrens.
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- Although the weather was very cold, Iit was really funny, ~~i enjoye~~I was glad to see her and their childrens.
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- One day, I would like to go to Paris to meet her and in the same occasion to visit Paris because i have never visited this city.
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- One day, I would like to go to Paris to meet her and in the same occasion to ~~visit~~see Paris because iI have never visited thisat city. ¶
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