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  • Animal rights

    • Animals one of the most effective creatures on the earth.
    • So some people think animals have created to exploit and uses them for making expensive clothes, food and research.
    • While other people believe animals same like humans have a sensing so they must have the same right as humans.
    • First group believes that animals should be train for using the require works, in fact they use animals in the field work, transportation, produce meat and dairy for production food.
  • Some people hunting the animals to produce expensive clothes for sale even brought wild animals from forests and use them to work in the zoos or circuses for making people entertain and cheer.
    • In addition, certain animals such as, rabbits, mice and monkeys use in research and education to produce the useful drugs for humankind in the laboratories.
  • Second, some other argues that the God created animals and give them lives, so humans haven’t right to exploited or killing them because animals have feeling such as pain, angry, kindness and depression, therefore people cannot exploit and kill them for cooking also shouldn’t be let humans to destroy the environment because not everything on the earth planet give to them for destroying.
    • In my opinion, animals creatures are helpful, kindly, loyal and lovely so it is blessing for humans.
  • But humans with carelessness and selfishness to have most of the extinct animals.
  • Unfortunately if that cause continues, it will great ecological catastrophe on the earth.
  • Because of this, we must be protect the animals right and to avoid damaging wildlife.
  • In fact, our life and earth planet dependent to existence of animals.

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    • So some people think animals have created to exploit and uses them for making expensive clothes, food and research.
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    • So some people think that animals have been created to be exploited and uses them ford in the making of expensive clothes, food and research.
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    • While other people believe animals same like humans have a sensing so they must have the same right as humans.
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    • While other people believe that animals same like humans have a sensing so they must, having senses, are equal to humans and must therefore have the same rights as humans.
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    • First group believes that animals should be train for using the require works, in fact they use animals in the field work, transportation, produce meat and dairy for production food.
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    • FThr first group believes that animals should be train for using the requireed and used for heavy works, i. In fact they use animals in thefor field work, transportation, produc and in the meat and dairy for production food.
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    • Some people hunting the animals to produce expensive clothes for sale even brought wild animals from forests and use them to work in the zoos or circuses for making people entertain and cheer.
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    • In addition, certain animals such as, rabbits, mice and monkeys use in research and education to produce the useful drugs for humankind in the laboratories.
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    • In addition to that, certain animals such as, rabbits, mice and monkeys are being used in research and education to produce the useful drugs for humankind in the laboratorielaboratories for scientific and educational purposes in order to test human drugs.
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    • Second, some other argues that the God created animals and give them lives, so humans haven’t right to exploited or killing them because animals have feeling such as pain, angry, kindness and depression, therefore people cannot exploit and kill them for cooking also shouldn’t be let humans to destroy the environment because not everything on the earth planet give to them for destroying.
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    • In my opinion, animals creatures are helpful, kindly, loyal and lovely so it is blessing for humans.
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    • In my opinion, animals creatures are helpful, kindly, loyal and lovely so it iscreatures and therefore they are a blessing for humanskind.
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