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    • Hello! Please, help me to improve my self-presentation text : )

    • Hi there. I’m Daria.
  • Or simply Dasha.
    • Passionate about knowledges, I like people to teach, explain to them clearly and see their progress.
    • I’m cheerful and open-minded person, both extremely patient and attentive, interested in my student’s success.
    • I’ve studied Russian with enthusiasm, getting places in language contests and finally done score 100/100 in the Government Exam.
    • So, I’m both very familiar with grammar, pronunciation and spelling rules.
    • I’m an architect and designer (have Bachelor and Master degrees).
    • That’s why I’m also good in technic and scientific texts, if you interested in it.
    • According to your needs, we can improve your talking skills by lively talk or learn more about grammar, rules and structure of language.
    • I can help you with native speakers’ slang and tell more about our culture and way of life.
    • I’m keen on travelling, art and culture, sports, science, spiritual knowledges and many other themes.
    • We can have interesting and effective communication experience.

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    • Passionate about knowledges, I like people to teach, explain to them clearly and see their progress.
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    • Passionate about knowledges, I like people to teach, people and explain to them clearly andto see their progress.
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    • PI am passionate about knowledges, I like people to teach people, explain to them clearly and see their progress.
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    • PI am very passionate about knowledges, I'd like people to teach, explaigive a clear explanation to them clearly and see their how they progress.
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    • PI am passionate about knowledges, and I like people to teach people, explain to themhings clearly to them, and see their progress.
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    • I’m cheerful and open-minded person, both extremely patient and attentive, interested in my student’s success.
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    • I’m a cheerful and open-minded person, both extremely patient and attentive, and also interested in my student’s success.
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    • I’m a cheerful and an open-minded person, both extremely patient and attentive, and also interested in my student’s success.
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    • I’m a cheerful and open-minded person, both extremely patient and attentive, and also interested in my student’s success.
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    • I’ve studied Russian with enthusiasm, getting places in language contests and finally done score 100/100 in the Government Exam.
      투표하세요!
    • I’ve studied Russian with enthusiasm, getting places inwon several language contests and finally done a score of 100/100 in the Government Exam.
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    • I’ve studied Russian with enthusiasm, getting places inI've won several language contests and finally doneI have great scores; 100/100 in the Government Exam.inations.
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    • According to your needs, we can improve your talking skills by lively talk or learn more about grammar, rules and structure of language.
      투표하세요!
    • According to your needs, we can improve your talking skills by lively talk or learning more about grammar, rules and the structure of the language.
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      투표하세요!
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