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Homework 2
This text is about business communication.
- It helps to communicate every people in organization and makes goodwill of an organization.
Business communication is different from other types of communication.
- It is simple and concise language.

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句子 1
- This text is about business communication.
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句子 2
- It helps to communicate every people in organization and makes goodwill of an organization.
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- It helps to communicate with every people in an organization and makes goodwill ofor an organization.
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句子 3
- Business communication is different from other types of communication.
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句子 4
- It is simple and concise language.
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- It is a simple and a concise language.
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