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    • He hears the girlfriend’s voice and he wake up from the unconsc

    • Hearing Anda’s voice has partially woken up Matthew Taylor from the unconsciousness.
    • “He watered when we have approached the phone to the ear, and when she has asked him a question, even he has whispered “yes”.
    • So Matthew’s godfather has told to Telegraph the miraculous moment when the boy has suddenly shown consciousness signs after ten months of unconsciousness.
    • The English man, 31, taught in Indonesia for 18 months when an accident with the motorcycle has ruined his dreams for the future.
    • After a complicated surgical intervention in the Isle, the boy came into unconsciousness and for ten long months his conditions are remained stable.
    • The crash has seriously damaged the skull and it seemed there was not hope for the Matthew’s awakening.
    • At the moment of the crash, the boy had not an health assurance, and in Great Britain this means paying £ 100,000 for his medical outlay.
    • So Matthew’s father has gave his life savings, while the godfather has started a second mortgage for his house.
  • There was the change when the medicals thought of trying a new option.
    • It’s about a program divided in different phases, and in someone are stimulated the patient’s sense of hearing, smell and touch, followed by periods of complete rest.
    • As a part of the program, three weeks ago Matthew’s mother has decided to call Anda, constrained by working reasons to stay far away from his boyfriend.
    • During a call phone, the boy has started watering, which in a few seconds had the face wet.
    • From here, a slow but impressive improvements of his conditions.

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    • “He watered when we have approached the phone to the ear, and when she has asked him a question, even he has whispered “yes”.
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    • “HeHis eyes watered when we have approachedput the phone to thehis ear, and when she hashis girlfriend asked him a questions, he even he has whispanswered “"yes” in a whisper.
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    • So Matthew’s godfather has told to Telegraph the miraculous moment when the boy has suddenly shown consciousness signs after ten months of unconsciousness.
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    • So Matthew’s godfather hwas told to Telegraph the miraculous moment when the boy has suddenly shown ed signs of consciousness signs after ten months of unconsciousness.
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    • The English man, 31, taught in Indonesia for 18 months when an accident with the motorcycle has ruined his dreams for the future.
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    • The English man, 31, taught in Indonesia for 18 months when an accident with the motorcycle has ruined his dreams for the future.
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    • After a complicated surgical intervention in the Isle, the boy came into unconsciousness and for ten long months his conditions are remained stable.
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    • After a complicated surgical intervention in the Isle, the boy came back into unconsciousness and for ten long months his conditions arhave remained stable.
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    • At the moment of the crash, the boy had not an health assurance, and in Great Britain this means paying £ 100,000 for his medical outlay.
      투표하세요!
    • At the moment of the crash, the boyMatthew had not an health assurance, and in Great Britain this meansresults in paying £ 100,000 for his medical outlay.
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    • So Matthew’s father has gave his life savings, while the godfather has started a second mortgage for his house.
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    • So Matthew’s father has gave his life savings, while the godfather has startedtook out a second mortgage foron his house.
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    • It’s about a program divided in different phases, and in someone are stimulated the patient’s sense of hearing, smell and touch, followed by periods of complete rest.
      투표하세요!
    • It’s about a program divided in different phases, and in someone are which stimulateds the patient’s sense of hearing, smell and touch, followed by periods of complete rest.
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    • As a part of the program, three weeks ago Matthew’s mother has decided to call Anda, constrained by working reasons to stay far away from his boyfriend.
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    • As a part of the program, three weeks ago, Matthew’s mother has decided to call Anda, constrained by working reasons to stay far away from his boyfriendwho couldn't visit her boyfriend due to the constraints of her working schedule.
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    • During a call phone, the boy has started watering, which in a few seconds had the face wet.
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    • During a call phone, the boy haphone call, Matthew's eyes started watering, which inand after a few seconds had theis face wetas wet from his tears.
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