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    • MY DAUGHTER SO CUTE

  • introducing myself my name is Yudi Yansyah, i was born on July 20st in 1984.
  • now, i live in Karawang, west Java indonesia. my address is Perum Gading Elok 1, blok K31 no.16 . i have one wife and two daughters her name Alma fairuz Ghaisani and Fadhia Inayah Istiqomah.
  • There are many happy in my family, for example my daughter is Fadia is always fun, very very fun, sometime i and wife was smiling when they played.
  • My home was disturb and messy. before i went to work, i was tidy up bed, kitchen, bedroom and garden. i think my daughter is fun and cute. i love you son.

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    • now, i live in Karawang, west Java indonesia. my address is Perum Gading Elok 1, blok K31 no.16 . i have one wife and two daughters her name Alma fairuz Ghaisani and Fadhia Inayah Istiqomah.
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    • There are many happy in my family, for example my daughter is Fadia is always fun, very very fun, sometime i and wife was smiling when they played.
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    • My home was disturb and messy. before i went to work, i was tidy up bed, kitchen, bedroom and garden. i think my daughter is fun and cute. i love you son.
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