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  • My Family. Ideal Family. Marriage Traditions. Family Relations.

  • Hello everybody.
    • My name is German.
    • I'm inhabitant of Kharkiv.
    • I study at university KhAI (Kharkiv aerospace institution).
    • So I would like to tell you about my Family.
    • And share with you my ideals of perfect family.
    • So, my family isn't huge.
    • I haven't any siblings.
    • It is family of 3.
    • Me, my mother and my father.
    • I'm just a student.
    • I'm going to work this summer.
    • I have finished the first course of my studying that year.
    • Study to be translater.
    • From Russian into English and reverse.
    • My mather is hairdresser.
    • She has her own salon (beauty salon).
  • She works all day long.
    • My parents are breadmakers both.
  • Because it is essential.
    • It is very difficult to live in our world. Crisis.
  • My father is an engineer.
    • He works in the company which drills ground and get gas.
    • He wakes up very early with cocks.
    • And comes home very late.
    • We are trying to have no misunderstandings and have no fighting.
    • Because we help each other.
    • Trying to solve our problems.
    • Trying to get a harmony.
    • I do my best at home.
    • Help them as I can.
    • Because family is the most important in the life.
    • Because nobody takes care of you except your parents.
    • Nobody help you except of them.
    • There is no perfect family in the univers.
    • Because everybody has own advantages and disadvantages.
  • I didn't say that we have a harmony.
  • We try to get it.
    • We have a lot of problems and trying to solve it.
    • I know not so much about marriage traditions.
  • Actually i know nothing.
  • Shame on me)) There are four kinds of relations in family.
  • It is custody, dictation, non-interference, cooperation.
  • For the first, it is dictation.
  • Method like dictation, I think it is the worst method of relationship.
  • Because if you dictate to your child what him to do his inside properties like initiative, independence, dignity, self confidence can disappear.
  • And childre will be like a body without own sense and thoughts. Custody.
  • But in the case of custody children can become lazy, because parents don't give the any errands to do.
  • Trying to satisfact their child.
  • And then their children grew up without any opportunity to work.
  • To live in Sociality.
  • Can't adapt to the environment.
  • Non-interference.
  • I look at all methods from the pessimistic side.
  • But this one is nice. Why?
  • Because if you don't help your child it will solve its problem without any help.
  • And can become a self-confident member of Society. Cooperation. Is good too.
  • Because all the members help each other.
  • And trying to get a harmony.
  • Like mine family.
  • Ok that's all i think. Enough.
  • Thank you for correction.

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