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    • I will talk about my city Hermosillo.
    • It's the capital of the state of Sonora, is a very hot city, there is winter but today is 31 celsius degree or 88 fahrenheit degree, so I don't leave very much because there are not many place to leave and it's pretty expensive so me and my friends have meeting in our homes.
  • My city is not a touristic place, it is a business city so it's boring but we have in spring very good events like las fiestas del pitic, it's the city foundations festivities and have very interesting events and come well known artists for free concerts.

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    • It's the capital of the state of Sonora, is a very hot city, there is winter but today is 31 celsius degree or 88 fahrenheit degree, so I don't leave very much because there are not many place to leave and it's pretty expensive so me and my friends have meeting in our homes.
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    • It' is the capital of the state of Sonora, is a very hot city, there is winter but today is 31 celsius deg. The temperature is high during all the year. Even though currently is winter, the temperature of today weree or 88 fahrenheit degree, so I don't leave very much because there are not manyf 31°C (88 °F). Usually I don't hang out due the temperature, the lack of places to leave and it's pretty expensive so me and my friends have meetinghang out and the high prices. So i prefer to meet with my friends in our homes.
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    • It's the capital of the state of Sonora, is a very hot city, there i.The weather is always hot. It's winter, now, but today it's 31 celsius degree or 88 fahrenheit degree, so°C (or 88°F). (Anyway) I don't letravel very muchoften because there are not many places to leavego to, and it's pretty expensive so me and my friends have meeting in our homes(around here) so my friends and I prefer to hang out together instead.
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    • My city is not a touristic place, it is a business city so it's boring but we have in spring very good events like las fiestas del pitic, it's the city foundations festivities and have very interesting events and come well known artists for free concerts.
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