添削

Jeffnaからのテキスト - English

Use at least one superlative and allow
To go to the most beautiful city of love, Paris, I needed three indispensable objects that allowed me to travel.
First the ID's, then the suitcase and finally a cell phone that could be used to entertain me in the plane with the most fun snap application that allows me to share lots of moments of my life.

タイトル
- Use at least one superlative and allow
  投票しよう！
- 新しい添削を追加しましょう！ - タイトル
文 1
- To go to the most beautiful city of love, Paris, I needed three indispensable objects that allowed me to travel.
  投票しよう！
- 新しい添削を追加しましょう！ - 文 1
文 2
- First the ID's, then the suitcase and finally a cell phone that could be used to entertain me in the plane with the most fun snap application that allows me to share lots of moments of my life.
  投票しよう！
- 新しい添削を追加しましょう！ - 文 2