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  • In 2016, according to the Minister of Education U Myo Thein Gyi in Myanmar, more than 3.5 million people over the age of 15 in Myanmar were illiterate.
    • As a developed country with a performant educational system, it is most normal that the Republic of Austria does care about the situation in Myanmar and generally speaking, the countries of Southeast Asia.
  • The consequences of illiteracy are multiple and harmful in several aspects.
  • As well as affecting illiterate individuals, they are themselves affecting their daily lives and often jeopardizing their future.
  • This scourge has a significant effect on society, both socially and economically.
  • It is an imperative issue to deal with because these illiterate children will one day become adults and the consequences of illiteracy on individuals and society include the following: limited ability to obtain and understand essential information, lower income, higher unemployment, lower-quality jobs, precarious financial position, low self esteem, which can lead to isolation.
  • Since the Republic of Austria is willing to avoid such consequences for Southeast Asia's children and wants to give them a brighter future, the international community must work with Austria in order to find solutions to solve this issue.
  • In the past, the General Assembly already voted the resolution A/RES/41/118 about efforts and measures to promote the eradication of illiteracy, but the Republic of Austria believes it is an emergency to focus on the children of Southeast Asia, where the situation could be improved easily.
  • The Republic of Austria believes in many ideas to eradicate this scourge of illiteracy.
  • First of all, financing a global program to build schools and allow children to access school in Southeast Asia, should be a top priority.
  • Indeed, one of the principal causes of illiteracy is the poor access to school in some remoted areas.
  • In the past few years, youth literacy rates increased from above 80% to almost 100% in South-East Asia but remained significantly low in some rural areas.
  • To solve this problem, Austria thinks of exempting companies willing to build schools in isolated areas from taxes.
  • Then, the Republic of Austria supports the idea of creating a school program directly inspired of the best pedagogical program through the world (Singapore, Taiwan, Canada…).
  • In fact, some of the countries quoted previously, are in the same time efficient in education and situated in Southeast Asia, so it might be time to organize a cooperation between high-performing countries and their less performant neighbours in their educational system.
  • Such a solution would offer not only the opportunity to lower the illiteracy rate, but would also allow children to get better skills and a true access to higher education.
  • Lastly, it’s known that inequalities in the access to education, exist not only between rural and urban areas but also between genders and socio-economic conditions that result in to disparities in the delivery of quality learning and opportunities, especially if we talk about access to ICT.
  • So, to cut illiteracy the Republic of Austria urges to elaborate a new and global program to provide a decent internet access to every child in Southeast Asia.
  • The UN could cooperate with companies to incite them to supply the more remoted regions, particularly in areas of Indonesia and The Philippines who obviously suffer much more from illiteracy than Singapore or Vietnam.
  • The Republic of Austria is honored to get the opportunity to deal with such important issues in front of the international community and is truly willing to find solutions to eradicate youth illiteracy in Southeast Asia.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • In 2016, according to the Minister of Education U Myo Thein Gyi in Myanmar, more than 3.5 million people over the age of 15 in Myanmar were illiterate.
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    • DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 1DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 1
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    • As a developed country with a performant educational system, it is most normal that the Republic of Austria does care about the situation in Myanmar and generally speaking, the countries of Southeast Asia.
      Glasajte sada!
    • As a developed country with a performant educational system, it is most normal that the Republic of Austria doescares/should care about the situation in Myanmar and generally speaking, the countries of Southeast Asia.
    • DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 2DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 2
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    • As well as affecting illiterate individuals, they are themselves affecting their daily lives and often jeopardizing their future.
      Glasajte sada!
    • DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 4DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 4
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    • It is an imperative issue to deal with because these illiterate children will one day become adults and the consequences of illiteracy on individuals and society include the following: limited ability to obtain and understand essential information, lower income, higher unemployment, lower-quality jobs, precarious financial position, low self esteem, which can lead to isolation.
      Glasajte sada!
    • DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 6DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 6
  • Rečenica 7
    • Since the Republic of Austria is willing to avoid such consequences for Southeast Asia's children and wants to give them a brighter future, the international community must work with Austria in order to find solutions to solve this issue.
      Glasajte sada!
    • DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 7DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 7
  • Rečenica 8
    • In the past, the General Assembly already voted the resolution A/RES/41/118 about efforts and measures to promote the eradication of illiteracy, but the Republic of Austria believes it is an emergency to focus on the children of Southeast Asia, where the situation could be improved easily.
      Glasajte sada!
    • DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 8DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 8
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    • First of all, financing a global program to build schools and allow children to access school in Southeast Asia, should be a top priority.
      Glasajte sada!
    • DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 10DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 10
  • Rečenica 11
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    • In the past few years, youth literacy rates increased from above 80% to almost 100% in South-East Asia but remained significantly low in some rural areas.
      Glasajte sada!
    • DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 12DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 12
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    • Then, the Republic of Austria supports the idea of creating a school program directly inspired of the best pedagogical program through the world (Singapore, Taiwan, Canada…).
      Glasajte sada!
    • DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 14DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 14
  • Rečenica 15
    • In fact, some of the countries quoted previously, are in the same time efficient in education and situated in Southeast Asia, so it might be time to organize a cooperation between high-performing countries and their less performant neighbours in their educational system.
      Glasajte sada!
    • DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 15DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 15
  • Rečenica 16
    • Such a solution would offer not only the opportunity to lower the illiteracy rate, but would also allow children to get better skills and a true access to higher education.
      Glasajte sada!
    • DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 16DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 16
  • Rečenica 17
    • Lastly, it’s known that inequalities in the access to education, exist not only between rural and urban areas but also between genders and socio-economic conditions that result in to disparities in the delivery of quality learning and opportunities, especially if we talk about access to ICT.
      Glasajte sada!
    • DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 17DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 17
  • Rečenica 18
    • So, to cut illiteracy the Republic of Austria urges to elaborate a new and global program to provide a decent internet access to every child in Southeast Asia.
      Glasajte sada!
    • DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 18DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 18
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    • The UN could cooperate with companies to incite them to supply the more remoted regions, particularly in areas of Indonesia and The Philippines who obviously suffer much more from illiteracy than Singapore or Vietnam.
      Glasajte sada!
    • DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 19DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 19
  • Rečenica 20
    • The Republic of Austria is honored to get the opportunity to deal with such important issues in front of the international community and is truly willing to find solutions to eradicate youth illiteracy in Southeast Asia.
      Glasajte sada!
    • DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 20DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 20