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    • Unemployment between highly qualified graduates

    • Statistics show that many highly-qualified graduates struggle to find employment.
    • In order to find adequate solutions to this phenomenon, we should focus on its main causes first.
  • To begin with, the first factor leading to such high rates of unemployment is the global recession that hit the world economy in 2008.
    • Such collapse shrunk trade, investment and had strong repercussions on the labour market as well.
  • Another pivotal element to explain the trend is the imbalances characterizing many labour markets worldwide, both in developed and low-income countries.
    • This could result in few job offers and low rates of flexibility.
    • Lastly, another reality is that many high-skilled people cannot find any jobs because they are not willing to start off with a lower position.
  • All this considered, it is now time to focus on possible solutions.
    • The most coveted one would entail strong economic reforms to the country's system.
    • Rather than betting on austerity, governments should rather try to spend more money in order to improve investment, trade and job creation.
    • A second strategy would be improving the labour system by implementing adequate structural changes that boost job creation and improve workers' rights and conditions.
  • Finally, countries should take into consideration the possibility of creating more flexibility at all levels.
    • Not only could they facilitate exchange programmes for workers (such as the erasmus one), but they could also make the internal market more flexible.
    • A measure aimed at this would be offering more part-time positions, so that more people can be hired at once.
    • To sum up, even though high-skilled people's unemployment can seem as an impossible challenge to face up with, governments can implement a considerable number of strategies to overcome such unfavourable trend.
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