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Scriptum ab Enson - English

  • A movie that I watched recently

    • The name of the movie is parastyle, has been adapted from a Japanese comic, is a science and horror comic.
  • The actors perform very well.
    • Also, the Japanese movie maker raise their skill of visual effects, make the monsters real.
    • When the monster would like to enter the main actor's ear, it scared me a lot.
    • The main actor doesn't have a father but only a mother who is his favorite, finally, another monster accessed and occupied her body, then she tried killing his son, and she have killed his son, fortunately the monster that lived in his body fixed his heart to save his life.
    • He felt so depressed, he must kill his mother, but he doesn't want to do it.Finally, his courage encouraged himself to kill his mother, this time, he is almost killed by his mother, but in the most important moment the mother was awake to stop herself killing her son, then his son killed his mother.

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    • The main actor doesn't have a father but only a mother who is his favorite, finally, another monster accessed and occupied her body, then she tried killing his son, and she have killed his son, fortunately the monster that lived in his body fixed his heart to save his life.
      Elige nunc !
    • The main actor doesn't have a father but, only a mother who is histreats him as her favorite, f. Finally, another monster accessed and occupied her body, then she tried killing his son, and sheer son. Fortunately, after haveing killed his son, fortunatelym, the monster that lived in his body fixed his heart to save his life.
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      Elige nunc !
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 5ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 5
  • Sententia 6
    • He felt so depressed, he must kill his mother, but he doesn't want to do it.Finally, his courage encouraged himself to kill his mother, this time, he is almost killed by his mother, but in the most important moment the mother was awake to stop herself killing her son, then his son killed his mother.
      Elige nunc !
    • He felt so depressed, he must that he had to kill his mother, but he doesidn't want to do it. Finally, his courage encouraged himself to kill his mother, t. This time, he iwas almost killed by his mother, but during the most importantcrucial moment the mother was awaoke to stop herself killing her son, then hisavoid getting killed by her son. Later her son killed his mother.
      JaazzJaazz profile picture Comments
      Elige nunc !
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 6ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 6