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Some British families decide not to buy televisions because they influence the development of the creativity of children.

TV is the device transmits/ broadcasts news, information to every house whose own it.

The birth of TV in the 20th century is the turning point of the media that brings about a series of changes (the advent/ introduction/ invention of a variety/series of other communication devices like remote, EchoStar satellite, pan antenna system… or create a whole new occupation, the people/ workers filmed to broadcast on television.) About the opinion that Some British families decide not to buy televisions because they influence the development of the creativity of children.

Personally, I think TV is still a necessity in the house.

It broadcast official news from the government in the official channel help people capture information.

TV also has many channels with different programs that bring useful information in any topics such as lifestyle, fashion, beauty, healthy, housing, stocking, economic, weather, drama, entertainment… and the program that kids most watch is cartoon.

The reason parents might think that TV influence the development of the creativity of children because children watch it in a long time, TV attracted the attention of children and at the age they are not aware and control their action so parents need to remind and pay attention about how long they can watch TV: Infants (0-24 months): 0 hours Toddlers (2 years - 3 years): up to 1 hour per day.

I think TV will help develop their creativity and their language ability if children watch it in an allowed time.

Beside that children also need to have fun, take part in outside activities, study to develop to a better person/ man.