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Text from Anurbg - English

    • This is not a piano

    • The difference between a piano in a living room and a piano in the middle of a square is only the place where it stays.
  • Both can be played, both can be appreciated, but only one invokes a poetic interpretation.
    • Every time we look at an ordinary thing such as a piano rarely comes to our minds a different idea other than that it is just a piano.
    • Everyday objects pass by our grim unnoticed and unattended, and we can not realize that except when they are misplaced.
  • This may occur due to the feeling of habituation that people carry with them on a daily basis.
  • We are living such busy lives that we select the things that really deserve our time and attention, and tend to exclude everything else.
    • That's one of the reasons why we need a surprising element in our lives to return us the feeling of enchantment towards the world around us.
  • Misplacing things is often interpreted as lack of intelligence or clue, and can cause a sense of discomfort.
    • However, when we place ordinary objects where they can be more visible and used in a different way, we unwittingly awake musing thoughts.
  • A television on a tree, a shoe used as a necklace, a man playing the piano in the middle of a crowded square.
    • We can see flourish the interest where once was nothing but lack of enchantment for everyday things.
  • Misplaced things create a contrast between odd and poetic, it catches our eyes with something almost invisible amongst our own self-absorption existence and calls for a curious interest, nearly recreating the childish feeling of discovering something new over again.
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PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • The difference between a piano in a living room and a piano in the middle of a square is only the place where it stays.
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    • The difference between a piano in a living room and a piano in the middle of a square is only the place where it stays.
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    • Every time we look at an ordinary thing such as a piano rarely comes to our minds a different idea other than that it is just a piano.
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    • Every time we look at an ordinary thing such as a piano, rarely comes to our minds a different idea other than that it is just a piano rarely enters our heads.
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    • Everyday objects pass by our grim unnoticed and unattended, and we can not realize that except when they are misplaced.
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    • Everyday objects pass by our grimGLANCE unnoticed and unattended, and we can not realize that except when they are misplaced.
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    • We are living such busy lives that we select the things that really deserve our time and attention, and tend to exclude everything else.
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    • That's one of the reasons why we need a surprising element in our lives to return us the feeling of enchantment towards the world around us.
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    • That's one of the reasons why we need a surprising element in our lives to return usin order to regain the feeling of enchantment towards the world around us.
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    • However, when we place ordinary objects where they can be more visible and used in a different way, we unwittingly awake musing thoughts.
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    • However, when we displace ordinary objects where they can be more visible andto prominent locations, used in a different way, we unwittingly awake musing thoughts.
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    • Misplaced things create a contrast between odd and poetic, it catches our eyes with something almost invisible amongst our own self-absorption existence and calls for a curious interest, nearly recreating the childish feeling of discovering something new over again.
      Vote now!
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