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Text from Nadal2017 - English

  • Life is better today than it was 100 years ago

    • We are living in a century where tecnology grows up day by day.
    • Every day we hear or read about new discoveries or inventions which help us to live more comfortably and safe.
    • It is know that 100 years ago people could die because a simple flu.
    • Nowadays people can live till 90 years or even more.
    • When my grandmother died was 105!
  • What an incredible woman!
    • We can also enjoyed of a large range of funny activities such as watching films, driving cars, playing computer games, talking on the mobile phones all that jazz.
    • In my opinion, life is better today because of the tecnological advances.
  • We can live longer and better.
    • But on the other hand, it is true that people are stressed because of our rithme of life.
    • We live in a competitive world and since our childhood, our society wants us to be better than the others.
    • We have always to be showing our value.

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