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  • Application

  • This letter is very important to me, thanks to anyone who will correct it seriously.
    • Love To whom it may concern, I am a second-year student at ESIEA, and I am writing today to apply for a semester at Hogeschool Van Amsterdam, during the second semester of 2019.
  • As the first reason for this choice is my feeling for living abroad.
    • Traveling is an incredible opportunity to become more open-minded, and this is a rewarding way for the self-development.
    • Ever since I was a child, I appreciated every single trip I had the chance to do, because I have learnt so much from them : traveling means independence, breaking away and heading off towards new horizons.
  • In 2013, my high school offered a student exchange with Netherlands, and I was given the chance to go to the Netherlands for a week.
    • Quickly, I recognized myself in the Dutch culture and I was so fond of this country that from that day on I come back to visit every two years.
  • Even though I often feel frustrated because I didn’t get to spend as much time in this country as I would have liked, and I know there are so many more things to be discovered.
  • According to me, a semester at Hogeschool Van Amsterdam would allow me to fulfil this wish and my career objectives.
    • Indeed, classes through this school match with my professional goals, which allows me to apprehend specialties that interested me.
  • I consider cybersecurity as a choice for my professional career in the future.
  • On the other hand, I know how to use any circumstances and what is expected of me, alone or in a group.
    • That’s why I’m convinced I will enjoy as much as possible this program, and that it could bring a concrete added value to my career.
    • If you find that you need any further information that I could provide, please feel free to contact me and I’ll be delighted to answer Best regards,

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