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Scriptum ab Marcomata - English

    • Natural Disaster: My experience

    • Most of the people don'r worry about natural disasters, I mean, they don't mind as long as everything is okay.
    • Everyone has heard bad news related to natural disasters through radio or Tv.
    • And something sticks out by seeing this: generally speaking, people don't follow protocols during the turmoil, even though they were supposed to know how to.
    • People often tend to get crazy inder such conditions.
    • Everyone starts to be concerned of their relatives, so the enviroment may often turn into a difficult situation.
    • In Mexico, an earthquake took place recently.
    • It was a terrible experience due to earthquake's magnitude and damages.
    • It was a 7.1 degrees movement, so it felt really strong.
    • I work in a second level at an Elementary school.
    • I was finishing my class with a six-age group.
  • It was 1:14 pm when all of a sudden everything started to shake violently.
    • The classrom's windows broke, and both desk and chairs moved back and forth.
    • Although I was really scared and nervous, I got calm down and drove my group down by the stairs to the school's yard.
    • It was a manageable situation because my children obeyed each one of my words.
    • I don't know how all my collegues went through this procedure, but it doesn't matter really, being that we got to put all the students save.
  • When I turned on the Tv, I could not believe it .
    • Puebla, Morelos and Mexico City were damaged terribly, and the places were in chaos.
    • To conclude my story, I think that keep the calm is very important to survive a situation like this one.
    • Being that It is a matter of time to get crazy, and reduce the chances to handle the turmoil.
    • I will thank your corrections guys.
  • But please, just let me know why you're correcting in order to figure out my mistakes. :)

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English