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Scriptum ab riichard_c - English

  • I'm jealous of my brother

    • Yes , It's true I'm jealous of he, because my family and me are poors and the government sent a help I'm talking about money , but the government only sent money to my brother so he bought a lot of things for himself and didn't give away nothing for me or the rest of the family but I think one thing feel envy is good because that motivate me to get money without help of the government and that way I could buy me clouthes and items for me and my family , so my aim is get a job which pay good

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • Yes , It's true I'm jealous of he, because my family and me are poors and the government sent a help I'm talking about money , but the government only sent money to my brother so he bought a lot of things for himself and didn't give away nothing for me or the rest of the family but I think one thing feel envy is good because that motivate me to get money without help of the government and that way I could buy me clouthes and items for me and my family , so my aim is get a job which pay good
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    • Yes , It's true I'm jealous of he,im because my family and meI are poors and the government sent a help . I'm talking about money , but the government only sent money to my brother so he bought a lot of things for himself and didn't give away noanything for me or the rest of the family b. But I think one thing feel envythat being envious is good because thait motivates me to get money without help of the government and in that way I could buy me clouthes and items for me and my family , s. So my aim is to get a job which pays good .
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