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    • After completing my Doctoral Degree Programs from Beijing Union Medical College of Tsinghua University, I came to the United State to study the cutting-edge technology.
  • In the bio-pharmacy field, I have acquired the licensed pharmacist qualification certificate issued by China Food and Drug Administration.
    • Parts of my research have already obtained the authorizations of the national patent, I was the first inventor, and my main works have also got accepted by high impact academic journals.
    • Attending academic conferences and giving presentations open my mind and horizon.
  • As time goes by, I cannot get enough the information from traditional biological research.
  • I came to realize that using traditional biotechnology it is hard to get the information lies in large-scale data of patients like next-generation sequencing.
  • It needs me to equip with the knowledge of data science and bioinformatics, which is on the upswing and attractive to me.
  • Therefore, I have paid special attention to the application of Computer Science theories.
  • Besides the courses I have learned in the university like VB Program Design and passing the Jiangsu Computer Rank Examination test, I also have been taking part in online Computer Science courses on Coursera.org and Udemy.com.
  • Taking these courses increases my capacity to self-study and I certainly enjoy learning different programming languages and Computer Science theories.
  • Studying for these has reinforced my determination to proceed on to higher education.

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    • After completing my Doctoral Degree Programs from Beijing Union Medical College of Tsinghua University, I came to the United State to study the cutting-edge technology.
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    • After completing my Doctoral Degree Programs from Beijing Union Medical College of Tsinghua University, I came to the United States to study the cutting-edge technology.
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    • In the bio-pharmacy field, I have acquired the licensed pharmacist qualification certificate issued by China Food and Drug Administration.
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    • Parts of my research have already obtained the authorizations of the national patent, I was the first inventor, and my main works have also got accepted by high impact academic journals.
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    • Parts of my research have already obtained the authorizations ofbeen authorized by the national patent,. I was the first inventor, and my main works have also got accepted by high impact academic journals.
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    • I came to realize that using traditional biotechnology it is hard to get the information lies in large-scale data of patients like next-generation sequencing.
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    • Besides the courses I have learned in the university like VB Program Design and passing the Jiangsu Computer Rank Examination test, I also have been taking part in online Computer Science courses on Coursera.org and Udemy.com.
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    • Taking these courses increases my capacity to self-study and I certainly enjoy learning different programming languages and Computer Science theories.
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