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  • Mankind

    • The most fantastic things about mankind we have an amazing ability to adaptive with all kind of different environments and the weather changes.
    • Also, forgetfulness it is fantastic how mankind can continue in there life especially after they lose the most lovely people for them for example (Parents, children the partner...etc).
    • Love is the best gift that we have it is the nicest thing on the earth when you see how're the moms love their babies when you see couple enjoy the time together even the animals enjoy love how beautiful to watch a little bee attach to flower is not wonderful to see love everywhere.
  • But now the most irritate thing about mankind for me is the hatred when I look around me and I see all this hatred around us I really get confused.
  • Why all this hatred?
  • We all the same whatever the differences between us like skin color, language. culture and religion but all of us have two eyes, one nose, one mouth, two ears, two arms, two legs and the same color of blood.
  • God, he is able to create all of us the same but make all these differences to complete each other and cooperate together to learn from each other and help each other.
  • The differences are the nature of the whole universe we have four season winter, summer, spring, fall also there is day and night, fresh water and salt water.
  • Lastly, the whole universe goes along together you will not see the day hate the night or the winter angry with the summer only you will find the hatred and anger only between the mankind for no reasons.
  • I really wish pace for all mankind on the earth and I hope to see the world free of fear hatred racism.

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    • The most fantastic things about mankind we have an amazing ability to adaptive with all kind of different environments and the weather changes.
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    • The most fantastic things about mankind are that we have an amazing ability to adaptive with all kind of different environments and the weather changes.
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    • The most fantastic things about mankind are that we have an amazing ability to adaptive with all kind of different environments and the weather changes.
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    • Also, forgetfulness it is fantastic how mankind can continue in there life especially after they lose the most lovely people for them for example (Parents, children the partner...etc).
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    • Also, forgetfulness iIt is fantastic how mankind can continue inwith theire lifeves especially after they loset the most lovely people for them for example (Ploved ones such as parents, children, their partner...s, etc).
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    • Also, forgetfulness iIt is fantastic how mankind can continue inwith theire lifeves especially after they loset l the most lovely people for them for example (loved ones such as Parents, children their partners...etc).
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    • Love is the best gift that we have it is the nicest thing on the earth when you see how're the moms love their babies when you see couple enjoy the time together even the animals enjoy love how beautiful to watch a little bee attach to flower is not wonderful to see love everywhere.
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    • Llove is the best gift that we have it is the nicest thing on theon earth when you see how're the momthers love their babies when you see, a couple enjoys their times together, even the animals enjoy love. how beautiful to watch a little bee attached to a flower. is nott is wonderful to see love everywhere.
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    • Llove is the best gift that we have it is the nicest thing on the earth when you see how're the momthers love their babies when you see, a couple enjoys their time together, even the animals enjoy love, how beautiful to watch a little bee attached to a flower, is nott is wonderful to see love everywhere.
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    • But now the most irritate thing about mankind for me is the hatred when I look around me and I see all this hatred around us I really get confused.
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    • We all the same whatever the differences between us like skin color, language. culture and religion but all of us have two eyes, one nose, one mouth, two ears, two arms, two legs and the same color of blood.
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    • God, he is able to create all of us the same but make all these differences to complete each other and cooperate together to learn from each other and help each other.
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    • The differences are the nature of the whole universe we have four season winter, summer, spring, fall also there is day and night, fresh water and salt water.
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    • Lastly, the whole universe goes along together you will not see the day hate the night or the winter angry with the summer only you will find the hatred and anger only between the mankind for no reasons.
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