Corrections

Observation

• This makes it very difficult the understanding of the text and the connections between the semantic parts.

• Especially if a person is not strong in using the Russian language.

• Not everyone can write as Leo Tolstoy.

• This is not criticism, just a simple observation.

• The order of words in a sentence can be arbitrary.

• At the beginning of the sentence, it is necessary to place the words that are at the moment most important in meaning.