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    • I enjoy working as a secretary.
    • In one of the distributor of consumer goods company in Jakarta Already 1 year 4 months working here, so many experience that i received Pleasant ambiance, have a nice people, hv 3 managers who can give good impact to me.
    • I plan to resign from the company, end of this month..hmm, i hope this is a good decision.
    • Crossed in my mind, i want to go abroad to Ausie, working there.
    • Is there anyone who have work experience. In Ausie?
    • Skype: EldyaTirza Email: tirzaeldya@gmail.com

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    • In one of the distributor of consumer goods company in Jakarta Already 1 year 4 months working here, so many experience that i received Pleasant ambiance, have a nice people, hv 3 managers who can give good impact to me.
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    • In¶¶I have a year and four months of experience with one of the distributor of consumer goods companyies in Jakarta.¶¶Already 1 year 4 months working here, so many experienMy workplace that i received¶¶Ps a pleasant ambiance, have a and I work with nice people,. hv 3 managers who can give good impact toThere are three managers who provide a good influence on me.
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    • I plan to resign from the company, end of this month..hmm, i hope this is a good decision.
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    • I plan to resign from the company, at end of this month..hmm, iI hope that this is a good decision.
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    • However, I plan to resign from the company, at the end of this month..hmm, i I hope this is a good career decision for me.
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