添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！未修正

Adrian_200からのテキスト - English

  • Do you play the lottery?

  • I used to play the lottery when I was a teenager.
  • It worked on my imagination.
    • I thought as everybody, what I would buy if I had been won main price.
  • However when I was older I changed my mind.
  • I don't believe in fast money.
    • It happens that somebody wins couple millions dollars, but it's highly improbable.
    • Smarter thing is organising lotteries.
  • You are always a winner.
    • I red artickle that poor people play lotteries more often than rich ones.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English