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petiteplanteからのテキスト - English

  • my experience in Paris

  • Good afternoon everybody!
    • i were gone to Paris two days ago because i were abble to lean news things to my new job.
    • Durant three days, i have study in the room with differents personn to French.
    • After lessons, i wolk, a lot of wolk in the streets to discover the paris ambiance.
    • Paris is beautifull. i am come back very try!!
  • ...Actually, i'm resting!!

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