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  • Christmas mood

    • That's it, we're in the Christmas time.
  • We see plenty of old women walking in the streets with bunch of bags.
  • We see all these people buying chocolates.
  • With the Black Friday, it's even worse this year.
  • The black friday is another american thing people imported in France, because they think it's cool - and mostly because it can help companies saling things.
  • But are people waiting for these occasions to buy things ? Don't think.
  • However people seem happier those times.
  • This must be the Christmas mood.
  • Nobody thinks to it as a Christ event anymore, they think to it as the time to make gifts, and that's what make them smiling.
  • Do they think of showing love ?
  • Christmas is a silly time.
  • It's really fun to see people smiling in the street, full of joy and malicious with their bags.
  • But for some, it's nothing more than the time where you've to pass exams, and then it's more stressful than joyful.
  • Still we have to admit, this is the only time when people don't think anymore to their bank account.
  • Finally, Christmas has its advantages.

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