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- Hello I‘m new here
- I'll keep diary everyday so that can improve my poor English .
- It came on to snow yesterday， so when I got up in the morning saw the ground is covered with snow .

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- Hello I‘m new here
  Stem nu!
- Hello I‘m new here i want friendship with u
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- ~~Hello~~Thank you for your message. I‘'m ~~new here~~ glad to be your friend
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Sætning 1
- I'll keep diary everyday so that can improve my poor English .
  Stem nu!
- I'll keep diary everyday ~~so that can~~to improve my poor English .
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Sætning 2
- It came on to snow yesterday， so when I got up in the morning saw the ground is covered with snow .
  Stem nu!
- It ~~came on to snow~~was going to snow tomorrow/it was snowing yesterday， so when I got up in the morning I saw the ground is covered with snow .
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- Tilføj en ny rettelse! - Sætning 2