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  • Where have you been abroad?

  • I'm from Poland.
    • First time when I've been abroad it was when I was eight.
  • We were with my parents in Netherlands.
    • It was a such amazing trip for me.
  • First time I saw other culture and it was fetching.
    • My mother's sister married man from Netherlands and they put up as ten days.
    • I was glad because I could rode a bike long hours.
  • The bike's paths were prepared perfectly and it was hitting that on roundabouts I had a right the way(instead cars).
  • I was got use to bad paths in my country and difference was tremendous.
  • One event especially stuck in my head.
  • We were with my parents and uncle with aunt in Amsterdam and went to red light district.
  • I was thinking why ladies stayed in shopwindows.
    • I had asked my father and he answered me that girls had been models advertising lingerie.
    • Couple years afterwards I discovered who they were in fact.
  • When we were in Netherlands twenty years later with my brother we visited Red Light District again.
    • When I was forty to forty five I've been working in Germany over one months every consecutive year.
  • It was so blast for me.
    • I learn very much and I felt free and independent.
  • However it's another story.
    • When I've been studied I visited Ukraine with my collegues from uni.
    • I had an impression that were very run-down country, but trip was very instructive.
    • Couple times I have been in Czech republic and Slovakia but it was uneventful episod.
    • I want really see in my life spectacular and faraway places, but it won' be easy.

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