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    • My challenge

    • How much do you like caffee.
    • Well, for a quite short time I have been trying to give up caffee in my life.
    • I have decided achieve this challenge because I have looked for some information and caffee brings negative efeccts in aour body, for example, it is addictive, can cause ulcers when the stomach is empty, sleep disorders and changes of mood.
    • It was not easy acchieve this seems because I live in a society where caffee is common in every time in the day.
    • At the end, I felt really and I do not miss coffee because I am conscious about my health and now I drink te or water.
    • So, I am sure the body will thank.

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    • I have decided achieve this challenge because I have looked for some information and caffee brings negative efeccts in aour body, for example, it is addictive, can cause ulcers when the stomach is empty, sleep disorders and changes of mood.
      투표하세요!
    • I have decided achieveto do this challenge because I have looked forfound some information andthat caoffee bringhas negative effeccts ion aour body, fies. For example, it is addictive, can cause ulcers when the stomach is empty, sleep disorders, and changes of moodmood swings.
      ShmedfoodShmedfood profile picture 댓글 1
      투표하세요!
    • I have decided achievto face this challenge because I have looked for some information and caoffee brings negative effeccts in aour body, for example, it is an addictive, can cause ulcers when the stomach is empty, sleep disorders and changes of mood.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture 댓글
      투표하세요!
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    • It was not easy acchieve this seems because I live in a society where caffee is common in every time in the day.
      투표하세요!
    • It was not easy to acchieve this seems because I live in a society where caoffee is common during every time inof the day.
      ShmedfoodShmedfood profile picture 댓글 1
      투표하세요!
    • It was not easy to acchieve this seems because I live in a society where caoffee is common in every time in thea day.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture 댓글
      투표하세요!
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    • At the end, I felt really and I do not miss coffee because I am conscious about my health and now I drink te or water.
      투표하세요!
    • AtIn the end, I felt really [good] and I do not miss coffee anymore because I am now conscious about my health and I now I drink tea or water.
      ShmedfoodShmedfood profile picture 댓글 1
      투표하세요!
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