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    • Various interests

    • My interest are mathematics, electronics, compiuters, readings, music, and of course chess ... but I can not find the time to do it all.
    • For now my favorite chess players of the past are Wilhelm Steiniz and Paul Morphy; the current ones are Garri Kasparov, Vladimir Kramnik and Veselin Topalov

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    • My interest are mathematics, electronics, compiuters, readings, music, and of course chess ... but I can not find the time to do it all.
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    • My interests are mathematics, electronics, compiuters, readings, music, and of course, chess ... but I can not find the time to do it all.
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    • My interests are in mathematics, electronics, compiuters, readings, music, and of course chess ... but I can no't find the time to do it all these.
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    • For now my favorite chess players of the past are Wilhelm Steiniz and Paul Morphy; the current ones are Garri Kasparov, Vladimir Kramnik and Veselin Topalov
      투표하세요!
    • For now, my favorite chess players of the past are Wilhelm Steiniz and Paul Morphy; the current ones are Garri Kasparov, Vladimir Kramnik and Veselin Topalov.
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      투표하세요!
    • For now mMy favorite chess players of the past are Wilhelm Steiniz and Paul Morphy; the current ones are Garri Kasparov, Vladimir Kramnik and Veselin Topalov
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