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Text from jedidias_d - English

  • A not so nice quality

    • Today, i go up to the bus and i found a beatiful girl.
    • She look me sometimes and looked like that she want talk to me.
    • I wanted to meet her, but i´m so shy, hopefully one day i can lose this quality and be able to talk whit strangers.

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