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    • The Pingxi─Shen'ao Line (平溪深澳線) is a good transportations when the tourists want to visit some hot attractions around New Taipei City.
  • For example, going the town of cats in Houtong(猴硐) or releasing a lantern into the sky (producing trash) in Pingxi (平溪).
    • I have been these two stations a year ago so I planned to go to other ones which most people doesn’t go.
  • I took a trip this time because of an amazing photo on the internet.
    • The photo was taken of the train during ‘’magic hour’’ in Wanggu (望古) station, I decided to go there after seeing the waterfall in Shifen (十分).
    • It took me about 15 minutes when I walked to Shifen Waterfall(十分瀑布) from Shifen train station.
    • The next train will arrive at after an hour, I needed to come back on time or I couldn’t go photography in Wanggu.
    • The Shifen Park were going to close at 16:30, thankfully, I arrived at 15:50.
    • Actually, this spot didn’t make me felt astonishing due to the waterfall was so small.
    • Anyway, I caught the train and went to Wanggu right away.
    • When I told the staff in tourist center in Shifen that I wanted to visit Wanggu, she didn’t recommend me to go there because it started to rain and the sky changed dark soonly.
    • I read the imformation on the internet and it said that Wanggu is the new and secret spot which most tourists doesn’t know.
  • I didn’t expect that I was the only person who got off from the train in Wanggu station.
    • This place is very solitude and silent aside from the sound of waterfall.
  • I followed the sound and hiked upon the mountain.
    • It was so scary that I was the only one in this area, I tried not to look around because I am afraid of seeing corpse or ghoast in the woods.
    • The waterfall was so green and mysterious, I thought it has a different style from Shifen Waterfall.
    • It’s sad that I didn’t take a good picture like the one I saw on the internet…so I will visit this place again in the future, of course, with someone to accompany me.

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    • The Pingxi─Shen'ao Line (平溪深澳線) is a good transportations when the tourists want to visit some hot attractions around New Taipei City.
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    • The Pingxi─Shen'ao Line (平溪深澳線) is a good transportations when the tourists want to visit some hot attractions around the New Taipei City.
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    • For example, going the town of cats in Houtong(猴硐) or releasing a lantern into the sky (producing trash) in Pingxi (平溪).
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    • I have been these two stations a year ago so I planned to go to other ones which most people doesn’t go.
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    • I have been to these two stations a year ago and so I planned to go to other ones whichere most people doesn’t go.
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    • The photo was taken of the train during ‘’magic hour’’ in Wanggu (望古) station, I decided to go there after seeing the waterfall in Shifen (十分).
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    • The photo was taken ofrom the train during ‘’magic hour’’ in Wanggu (望古) station, I decided to go there after seeing the waterfall in Shifen (十分).
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    • It took me about 15 minutes when I walked to Shifen Waterfall(十分瀑布) from Shifen train station.
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    • It took me about 15 minutes when I walked toto reach Shifen Waterfall(十分瀑布) from Shifen train station.
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    • The next train will arrive at after an hour, I needed to come back on time or I couldn’t go photography in Wanggu.
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    • The next train will arrive at after an hour, I needed to come back on time or I cwouldn’t gobe able to go for photography in Wanggu.
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    • When I told the staff in tourist center in Shifen that I wanted to visit Wanggu, she didn’t recommend me to go there because it started to rain and the sky changed dark soonly.
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    • When I told the staff in tourist center in Shifen that I wanted to visit Wanggu, she didn’t recommend me to go there because it started to rain and the sky changturned dark soonlyer.
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    • I read the imformation on the internet and it said that Wanggu is the new and secret spot which most tourists doesn’t know.
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    • I read the imnformation on the internet and it said that Wanggu is the newest and secret spot which most tourists doesn’t know.
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    • It was so scary that I was the only one in this area, I tried not to look around because I am afraid of seeing corpse or ghoast in the woods.
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    • It was so scary that I was the only one in thisat area, I tried not to look around because I amwas afraid of seeing corpse or ghoast in the woods.
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    • It’s sad that I didn’t take a good picture like the one I saw on the internet…so I will visit this place again in the future, of course, with someone to accompany me.
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    • It’s sad that I didn’t take a good picture like the one I saw on the internet…so I will visit this place once again in the future, of course, with someone to accompany me.
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