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The Trip to Jiufen
- I went to Ruifang train station and transfer to the bus for visiting the beautiful night view in Jiufen(九份).
- Jiufen is a meaniful place for me.
- I have been here 3 years ago for the schoolwork.
- I ‘’ become friend ’’ with my best friend at that time and we made a magazine together.
- I choose Jiufen as a place to say goodbye to my student life.
- Actually, I had work for two companies since I graduated from college 5 months ago.
- However, my mind didn’t put on the work because it was so difficult to love the jobs, trying not to query every decition which was made by myself.
- I got a new job from a bigger company days ago, I think this job will good for my future.
- Before going for work on Wednesday, I need to memorize those old memory when I was a student.
- Though Jiufen is a popular tourist attractions, most of stores were closed after 7 pm.
- We went to explore the beauty of Jiufen at night and interviewed the two famous food store last time.
- I was surprised at their nice and polite attitude, they answered our questions patiently.
- We were just a freshmen at that time and we knew them because they had been reported by lots of media.
- I think the experience of making a magazine about Jiufen was the only thing make me proud of myself in my college life.
- Sadly, I couldn’t find one of the stores this time and the rain gets heavier suddenly.
- I went to the other store and eating taro balls (芋圓).
- After enjoying the delicious food, I plucked up my courage and walked to the boss.
- I asked her, ‘’ I had a interview with you and sent you a magazine which made by us to you 3 years ago.
- Do you remember?
- ’’ She was still nice and polite, but I could tell from her face—She didn’t know what I am talking about.
- It doesn’t a good situation to say goodbye to the past, it’s so depressed that you found the meaniful menmory for you is nothing for others.
- I hope I can come to Jiufen again with no hopes again, if I won’t expect anything, I think I can enjoy the better trip next time.
- DebbyK
November 2017
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