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    • A day in the hight school

    • Juan jump of bed.It meal the breakfast very very fast and run for the bus of the school.
    • His arrive later a hight school his lost the bus, it go is walking three km.
    • The teacher Manolo is very angry with Juan is the quarter time arrive later is week.

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    • Juan jump of bed.It meal the breakfast very very fast and run for the bus of the school.
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    • Juan jump of bed.It meal the breakfast very very fastf the bed, he ate the breakfast quickly and ruan for the bus ofto the school bus.
      67% GOOD (3 votes)
    • Juan jumped out of bed.It meal th, ate breakfast very very fastquickly, and ruan for the bus ofto catch the school bus.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
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  • 문장 2
    • His arrive later a hight school his lost the bus, it go is walking three km.
      투표하세요!
    • Hishe arrive later a hight school hisd too late so he lost the bus, it go ishe had to walking three km. on foot
      67% GOOD (3 votes)
    • His arrive later a hight school his lost the bus, it go ise was late for school because he missed the bus and had to walking three km.
    • Hise arrive d later a hight school his lost the bus, it go isbecause he missed the bus and thus had to walking three km.
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  • 문장 3
    • The teacher Manolo is very angry with Juan is the quarter time arrive later is week.
      투표하세요!
    • The teacher Manolo iwas very angry withfrom Juan it's the quarterfourth time he arrives later isly week.
      50% GOOD (2 votes)
    • TheJuan's teacher, Manolo i, was very angry with Juan is the quarter timhim because it was the fourth time this week he arrived later is week.
    • TheHis teacher, Manolo i, was very angry with Juan is the quarter time arrive later issince he had been late for the forth time for that week.
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