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  • CNN reportage

    • First of all, the report begins with a question connected to news, in order to intrigues the viewer and introduce the subject.
    • A voice offer explains that the electric cars were invented in the 1890’s, and she says that one out of three cars was electric.Thanks to old photographies, we can see how these cars were at that time.
    • The Anchor compares this situation to the current situation, and he explains that nowadays, electrics cars in the US know more succes than they used to, eventhough these cars sales are about only 1 percent.
    • A reporter’s voice offer presents the possible future of our cars.
    • He explained that Japan has always outperformed others countries, and he that japanese engineers are hoping for an algae system to make new cars work.
    • After that, wonders when the flying cars’ issue, from Back to the future II, will arrive.
    • He informs us that a toyota workers team is woorking on that projet, and that these workers planned a demonstration for 2020.

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    • First of all, the report begins with a question connected to news, in order to intrigues the viewer and introduce the subject.
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    • First of all, the report begins with a question connected to news, in order to intrigues the viewer and introduce the subject.
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    • A voice offer explains that the electric cars were invented in the 1890’s, and she says that one out of three cars was electric.Thanks to old photographies, we can see how these cars were at that time.
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    • A voice offver explains that the electric cars were invented in the 1890’s, and she says that one out of three cars was electric.Thanks to old photographies, we can see how these cars were at that time.
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    • The Anchor compares this situation to the current situation, and he explains that nowadays, electrics cars in the US know more succes than they used to, eventhough these cars sales are about only 1 percent.
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    • The Anchor compares this situation to the current situation, and he explains that nowadays, electrics cars in the US know more success than they used to, even though these cars sales are about only 1 percent.
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    • The Anchor compares this situation to the current situation, and he explains that nowadays, electrics cars in the US knowhave more success than they used to, even though these cars sales areare only about only 1 percent of all car sales.
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    • He explained that Japan has always outperformed others countries, and he that japanese engineers are hoping for an algae system to make new cars work.
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    • He explained that Japan has always outperformed others countries, and he that japanese engineers are hoping for an algae system to make new cars work.
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    • He informs us that a toyota workers team is woorking on that projet, and that these workers planned a demonstration for 2020.
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    • He informs us that also a toyota workers team is woorking on that project, and that these workers planned a demonstration for 2020. ¶
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    • He also informs us that a toyota workers team is woorking on that project, and that these workers are planneding a demonstration for 2020. ¶
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